haiku - cinquain - tanka - sedoka - modernist - nonet - prose - free verse - rhyme - and any other style I decide to try master
Ah, the eternal triangle. I don't know much about the tanka (or other poetic forms, for that matter), but this works for me. I can see and hear this courtship. Welcome to One Shot.
the angry mating dancing...the fight between fear of the unknown and the desire...i like the tension in this...
Thanks for stopping by and your comments. Much appreciated. I have changed the line 4th line as I realised that my syllable count was out. Hope it still works.
Sounds like there was some competition going on there! Neat One Shot, Catherine!
timeless ... good one. I liked it...ॐ नमः शिवाय Om Namah Shivaya Twitter: @VerseEveryDay Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
The really intruging line in this is "draws me outdoors." Nice one.
Sparrows? In a menage a trois? Who would have guessed?
They were a really excited trio... Jabbering louder and faster than an auctioneer at a cattle auction... Thanks for stopping by everyone and, more especially, taking the time to comment.
i am a avid bird lover...so this grabbed my attention and set my mind wandering...thanks...pete
Thanks for stopping by Pete. Appreciate it.