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Johannesburg, Gauteng, South Africa
I am a white African. Contradiction in terms? I think not. Sometimes my blog will be serious; sometimes sad; sometimes irreverent; sometimes witty; always my truth simply written.

Sunday, December 26, 2010

LOST


midnight
on the other side of nothing
on the road to nowhere
clutching at
fragments of memory
ghosts
sanity

on the other side of nothing
on the road to nowhere

(Thanks to Annie Welch of Facial Expressions Poetry Circle on FB for her rewrite of my poem.  This works much better.)

© Marion Friedenthal

2 comments:

  1. Wow! Thanks for mentioning me...I am glad I helped.

    Annie

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  2. Annie, if ever I don't acknowledge help I receive it will be pure oversight, not deliberate. I really valued your input on this one. Thanks for stopping by.

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