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I am a white African. Contradiction in terms? I think not. Sometimes my blog will be serious; sometimes sad; sometimes irreverent; sometimes witty; always my truth simply written.

Wednesday, December 15, 2010

REDEMPTION

he died
as the sun died
rejected by a friend
at least thrice before the cock crowed
and while some protested his innocence
and others hung their heads with shame
a woman wailed and wept
and the earth shook

he died
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1st attempt at Rictameter

5 comments:

  1. Well written, leaves me with questions

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  2. he dies,
    sad words, well captured sentiments.

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  3. Greetings!
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    End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

    At this time of the year, We wish you all the best !

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  4. Thanks guys for stopping by and commenting. Glad you could sense the emotion in it...

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