tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2917502260922327279.post5137865155975425612..comments2023-07-01T10:49:10.358+02:00Comments on Bleeding Moon Poetry: COMRADESCatherine Mackiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07740025648799655351noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2917502260922327279.post-90105470737403681372010-10-16T00:04:29.140+02:002010-10-16T00:04:29.140+02:00Thank you for the suggestion. I can see how an &#...Thank you for the suggestion. I can see how an 'oblique' reference would make it more interesting.Catherine Mackiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07740025648799655351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2917502260922327279.post-11006538345991034842010-10-15T23:31:56.935+02:002010-10-15T23:31:56.935+02:00I like it. do-doef, do-doef.
I would consider rep...I like it. do-doef, do-doef.<br /><br />I would consider replacing "To finish the Comrades Marathon." with, perhaps, something a little more oblique, like "Is twenty-six miles away". Implying the marathon indirectly.J Cosmo Newberyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04459976320205444628noreply@blogger.com