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Johannesburg, Gauteng, South Africa
I am a white African. Contradiction in terms? I think not. Sometimes my blog will be serious; sometimes sad; sometimes irreverent; sometimes witty; always my truth simply written.

Friday, November 5, 2010

RAINSTORM

nature’s rock concert –
violent jagged strobe lights,
drum-rolls of the sky



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5 comments:

  1. Love this - especially the second line!

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  2. Thanks legend... This is one of my favourites that I've written and I was begining to think that no one else likes it... You made my day...

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  3. you take my breath away,
    I bow to you here,
    thanks for sharing..
    I am your first follower.

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  4. How are you, friend?

    Glad to land on your exciting poetry land here.

    Welcome linking in a poem to our potluck today, Thanks in advance!

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/11/poetry-potluck-buildings-landmarks-and.html

    Some awards will be assigned upon participation.

    I signed in to follow your blog.
    Welcome follow us back.

    First time participants can simply submit an old poem.

    xxx

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  5. Jingle... Thank you so much for visiting, commenting and now following my poetry blog. I certainly will be visiting you for potluck... just hope I'm not too late 'cos it's now 10 November where I live.... damned time zones... LOL

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