mercury rising -
merciless life-giving sun
endangers all life
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About Me
- Catherine Mackie
- Johannesburg, Gauteng, South Africa
- I am a white African. Contradiction in terms? I think not. Sometimes my blog will be serious; sometimes sad; sometimes irreverent; sometimes witty; always my truth simply written.
Like your haiku, Catherine. 'merciless life-giving sun' - interestingly oxymoronic? And thanks for stopping by my blog. Things look good round these here parts!
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Luke
Thanks Luke. I thought maybe it was more of a paradox?? But I'm not exactly a grammar fundi... just write what 'feels' right to me without understanding why half the time lol
ReplyDeleteshort yet skillfully done,
ReplyDeletelove the imagery.
Haiku is probably my favourite style of poetry. I relish trying to tell an entire story in 17 syllables... Thanks for the invite to Poets Rally will definitely be popping in.
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