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I am a white African. Contradiction in terms? I think not. Sometimes my blog will be serious; sometimes sad; sometimes irreverent; sometimes witty; always my truth simply written.

Friday, October 8, 2010

RHYTHM

When the rhythm is just right
do not falter at all
allow your bodies to take flight
to rise, then soar, then fall
‘midst -
gasping
groaning
grinding
panting
pleading
praying,

begging God for more.


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8 comments:

  1. dustusDecember 5, 2010 at 10:48 PM

    Well written.

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  2. Catherine MackieDecember 5, 2010 at 10:56 PM

    Thanks dustus. As I said, I cheated 'cos I posted old poems...

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  3. moondustwriterDecember 6, 2010 at 2:53 AM

    Ah a great rhythm in this poem

    thanks for sharing with One Shoot

    Moonie smiles

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  4. ReflectionsDecember 6, 2010 at 3:04 AM

    Oh, powerful rhythm in this piece, begging God for more... wow.

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  5. Catherine MackieDecember 6, 2010 at 8:57 AM

    Thank you for reading and commenting. Much gratitude. :D

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  6. AnonymousDecember 11, 2010 at 2:00 AM

    I missed your comment on my blog! It was flagged as possible spam...Not Spam! said I...

    Its nice to read your writing and comments here, my blog and on FB as well!

    I feel we share a passion for short form and syllable counting : )

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  7. AnonymousMarch 11, 2011 at 12:49 AM

    Ummm...I liked it! Got a stir from me!

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  8. OliviaMarch 13, 2011 at 7:59 PM

    Oh well!
    This is more powerful than it seems :)
    Isn't this how even life goes on?

    Smiles xx

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