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I am a white African. Contradiction in terms? I think not. Sometimes my blog will be serious; sometimes sad; sometimes irreverent; sometimes witty; always my truth simply written.

Sunday, December 5, 2010

FAITH


when faith falls away
all that remains is darkness
no sun moon and stars


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6 comments:

  1. eyeographyDecember 5, 2010 at 1:32 PM

    So true...I loved your haiku :)
    Really it is always dark when faith fades away...

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  2. Gemma WisemanDecember 5, 2010 at 1:38 PM

    Faith is like an inner strength, the rock to keep us grounded in our beliefs!

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  3. CherylDecember 5, 2010 at 2:21 PM

    Beautiful and evocative.

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  4. Catherine MackieDecember 5, 2010 at 3:11 PM

    Thank you so much for visiting and commenting. I tried to write this haiku so that the first and third lines could be transposed and the haiku would still make sense. Hope I succeeded.

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  5. Vinay Leo R.December 11, 2010 at 2:36 PM

    you did succeed in that, Catherine.. and it makes sense.. lovely, beautiful haiku..

    :)

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  6. The Write GirlDecember 13, 2010 at 5:13 AM

    Beautiful imagery in this haiku...love your take on faith.

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