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he died
as the sun died
rejected by a friend
at least thrice before the cock crowed
and while some protested his innocence
and others hung their heads with shame
a woman wailed and wept
and the earth shook
he died
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oh! very touching...
ReplyDeleteWell written, leaves me with questions
ReplyDeletehe dies,
ReplyDeletesad words, well captured sentiments.
Thanks guys for stopping by and commenting. Glad you could sense the emotion in it...
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