midnight
on the other side of nothing
on the road to nowhere
clutching at
fragments of memory
ghosts
sanity
on the other side of nothing
on the road to nowhere
(Thanks to Annie Welch of Facial Expressions Poetry Circle on FB for her rewrite of my poem. This works much better.)
(Thanks to Annie Welch of Facial Expressions Poetry Circle on FB for her rewrite of my poem. This works much better.)
© Marion Friedenthal
Wow! Thanks for mentioning me...I am glad I helped.
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Annie, if ever I don't acknowledge help I receive it will be pure oversight, not deliberate. I really valued your input on this one. Thanks for stopping by.
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