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I am a white African. Contradiction in terms? I think not. Sometimes my blog will be serious; sometimes sad; sometimes irreverent; sometimes witty; always my truth simply written.

Friday, November 5, 2010

PRIMAL

dark midsummer night
naked mystic made magic
beneath bleeding moon


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8 comments:

  1. Oh, love anything to do with magic and moon light. Lovely Haiku.


    Melanie

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  2. Hi Melanie. Thanks for stopping by. Visiting the other 'mystic' haiku's I found it interesting how many different approaches there were to a haiku on the same word.

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  3. Every word in this = an explosion of meanings/etc. Potent!

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  4. Thank you Steve for your generous praise. What I love about the totally structured 5-7-5 syllable haiku is that it forces you to think long and hard about what words will work... for me haiku is a labour of pure love...

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  5. hi Catherine.. welcome to Haiku Heights meme :) your mystic is very magical.. love and passion I could detect.. amazing how a word can get out so many different views! :)

    please do give a link back to Haiku Heights in your post :) if any of your readers wants to participate, then they can use that to find us na :)

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  6. Hi Leo, Thanks for visiting. I've put a link to Haiku Heights... hopefully guests will follow up on it...

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  7. magic beneath bleeding moon,

    wow,
    compact,
    striking,
    and
    entertaining.

    keep it up.
    you are a super capable poetess,
    your talent soars here.
    Glad to read you today.

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  8. Thanks Jingle... You are too generous with your praise... but I lap it up happily... Thanks for following...

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